I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teacher is Mr Janse
Sunday, September 20, 2020
Monday, September 14, 2020
Mani - Explanation Writing - T3W7
EXPLANATION TEMPLATE
Remember the S.E.E.E structure
S | Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause. - To be a good scientist you need to be smart,predictive and be specific with things when you are trying to be a scientist |
E | Explain - Define the cause - this means if You want to be a good scientist you need to know everything you're Doing. This define you to doing the right thing |
E | Example - connect to the reader - for example Tell the reader what they can do better and how he/she book is doing e.g. The reader needs specific writing to make it better. |
E | Effect - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then it can help the reader learn what he needs to fix and make it more interesting |
WALT use the S.E.E.E structure to write an explanation about friendship.
Title This will start with HOW... or WHY... | WHY WE NEED WIFI |
Introduction What are you going to explain? How will you hook the reader in? | I gonna explain to he/she that he/she need more information about what happen to this story and why it needs some specific words, e.g. if the story Have 1 - 2 specific words I am gonna explain to him more about why the he/she needs more specific word this will help reader get information about how this is written and will inspire him to make a compulsive book that will help other reader. |
Paragraph One What is your first statement or main point? (S.E.E.E) | My Main point is To be predictive,specific and gently with things when trying to create something new. |
Paragraph Two What is your second statement or main point? (S.E.E.E) | My statement is if you wanna achieve what you wanna be You need to have everything sorted e.g. if you wanna be a engineer you need to know what to do and what is the problem with it or if you wanna be a scientist you need to figure out what is causing this or what is making it. This is why you need to learn before you You wanna become it |
Paragraph Three What is your third statement or main point? (S.E.E.E) | If you're reading a book and it does not sound compulsive Try to email the reader That there wasn’t any inclusive words in the book and you want more from him. So you email the reader that you want more compulsive words for the book and that will help make a differences |
Conclusion The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end. This could be a recommendation or a personal connection. | Conclusion is that if some reader have some more compulsive words in their stories it would help then grow the writing even more |
Tuesday, July 21, 2020
Wednesday, June 10, 2020
Diffenrent between a human and a ape
Algebra
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Monday, March 9, 2020
what makes a good friend
Monday, March 2, 2020
EXPLANATION TEMPLATE
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Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause - To be a good scientist you need to be . . .
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Explain - Define the cause - this means . . .
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Example - connect to the reader - for example...
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Effect - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then . . .
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Title
This will start with HOW... or WHY...
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Introduction
What are you going to explain? How will you hook the reader in?
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Best friends are like groups.friends are like people who never turn their back on you .you're best Friends are like a person who you can rely and trust on
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Paragraph One
What is your first statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)
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Friends is a person who you can trust and talk to with the things that had happened and who you can trust with all of your dark and deep secrets
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Paragraph Two
What is your second statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)
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Friends is like a family member,friends will always be there when your not in mood and when you feel lonely,friends is the person who can be trusted
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Paragraph Three
What is your third statement or main point? (S.E.E.E)
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Friends are people that can be looked up to and trusted. Usually friends have similar interests. A friend is one who admires a person's skill and helps or encourages them to make the right choices
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Conclusion
The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end. This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.
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Friends make sure that you do not get into any trouble at all. The strength of the bond of friendship between two people can change one another
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